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October Haze

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I drink to the sound of bells,
lifting the glass to my lips
just as fall maple
surrounds itself in a rain of falling
leaf.

The redness of the sky

matches the redness in my cheeks,
the flushed lines of my face,
and the old porch
abandoned by all
but
the seasonal flood
of crimson leaves.

Soft wind scatters
the brown dust off the shelves.
A page falls before the breeze
and the red cover
seems split with age.

All the room is dust,
maple leaf,
and haze.
What my mind does not perceive
I still hear
as if in a dream.

Red leaf scatters.
The maple tree breathes.
I lift my lids to the sound of bells
and let loose
to leaves
and the red, red dream.
Trying on a more concise and "Japanese" style of poetry that uses just scenes and non-intrusive imagery to suggest and invoke rather than to present brashly or shove into the spotlight.
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TheMoorMaiden's avatar
I really like the recurring splashes of red, personally I think it really helped with the style you were going for. :) I love the line: 'All the room is dust,/ maple leaf,/ and haze.' I imagined a really old room, and I loved the idea that autumn has aged all around it as the year grows older. Lovely work. :)